Janet ..

Cherry

By denni1

Sat, 01 Dec 2012
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16 comments
 

Please don't ask
I can't explain
Why it haunts
My mothers name.

Begins with J
That's all l'll say
I think about her
every day.

Wondering how she'd have turned out.
I mean, if she had stuck around.
Topping herself at 42
What a fucking thing to do
Selfish cow, or poor, lost lamb.
I'll never know, or understand.

Women are meant to love their young

Well?

AREN'T THEY ?

Certificate 18
Story
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Comments

Submitted by moonphish on
wow...that is some pretty heavy stuff - alvin

Submitted by denni1 on
Heavy but troooothfool xx

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Denni, I was so moved by this piece of writing, mainly due to the fact my mum took her own life, jumping from the bathroom window. Who knows why these things happen? fear is maybe one, but it's very sad for those left behind. My thoughts go out to you and I hope it's a situation you can finally come to terms with. Jenny.

 

Submitted by denni1 on
Jesus .. how horrible, and a flippin bathroom ?? Wonder why ?? I would love to speak with you, if you want to email me xx l understand if you don't, too Dx

Submitted by moonphish on
i lost my mom when she was 43 and i was 9....kidney failure but i remember being angry at her for leaving nonetheless....took years to come to terms with that. my heart goes out to both of you

Submitted by denni1 on
Oh my goodness .. cherries! I am totally thankful to whoever picked, and sincerely apologize for the swearing xx mer see bow coo. Denise xx

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Congrats on the cherries,denni. More than deserved;-) Tina

 

Submitted by denni1 on
Gettaway !! Am dumb struck !! Fankyoo for reading my daft stuff. Lots love xx !!

Submitted by denni1 on
Thank you, Alvin xx we are in the same rocky boat !! Dx

Submitted by Wes on
Can't think of anything to say-save-Wow !...Wes

 

Submitted by denni1 on
Wes .. l admit it. Am fick sometimes! What do you mean, if anything !! Dx

Submitted by scratch on
Well done denni1. That's a tough one to deal with. You have written about it so well. Congrat's on the cherries.

 

Submitted by The Talisman on
Sorry.

Submitted by denni1 on
Oh. It's real lovely of you to say xx thanks xx

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi denni, so sorry to come late back to your comment. Can I first say how great it was to see this had been cherry picked. I hope you understand that I don't really want to talk about my mum. It was back in 2000, so I've kind of accepted what happened and have now moved on. But I wish you well and hope that time heals, as it has me, although it's something I don't think you ever forget. All the best. Jenny.

 

Submitted by denni1 on
Brilliant xx l am so very glad .. and l think l was over reacting, so, sorry bout that! Lots love xx