ONOMATOPOEIA

Cherry

By Dragao40

Wed, 20 Feb 2019
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ONOMATOPOEIA

 

Long walks           on short days

Brief smile            on a long face

Not enough          onomatopoeia in my life

 

Large bag            of small toys

Long wait             for brief joys

Not enough          onomatopoeia in my life.

 

I want to

Sizzle, squelch, shout when the kids go out

Bang, crash, boom in the best bed room

Let’s not ration our passion or put our love on a diet.

Do you think we might try it?

 

Chocolate body paint – unused

Self esteem – well bruised

Not enough          onomatopoeia in my life

 

Sweet laugh         in a sour room

Soft touch            breaks the gloom

Not enough          onomatopoeia in my life

 

I want to

Sizzle, squelch, shout when the kids go out

Bang, crash, boom in the best bed room

Let’s not ration our passion and put our love on a diet.

Do you think we might try it?

Even just for one night?

 

Hot nights in a cool place

Big smile on a small face

…………onomatopoeia in my life

 

Cold room – warm embrace

Inhibitions – no trace

…………onomatopoeia in my life

 

 

 

 

Certificate 15
Poem
Things that sometimes rhyme.....
Other Fiction

Comments

Submitted by Ewan on

these lyrics for a song? Much enjoyed.

Author Page at the 'Zon
 

Submitted by Dragao40 on

Hi Ewan

Thanks for taking the time to read this and your kind coments. These are, indeed, lyrics for a song. Hopefully I'll be setting them today and tomorrow. It's part of the 'A song A week' Challenge.

I've not managed a song a week but it helps to keep me focussed.

Thanks once again. I will take a look at your novels.