Country Life
By drkevin
Fri, 16 Jul 2021
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I do like rambles,
Especially picking brambles.
But it can be mud and scrambles.
In which case it's just a shambles,
So I'm off tut pub instead (without preambles).
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before or after?
Each sentence has the same rhyme but every time it's another word with an other meaning and it is coherent. I like this, artistic. Rhythm works out as well.
Very good! Written before or after? Or in between the swallows cold beer and froth or during clinking glasses brandy and coke? Money against the wall. It's insanity. It's a mugg's game.
Cheers! 21 years Grace of God. A new life.
& Nolan
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