Hannah

By alexwritings

Fri, 24 Feb 2012
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This poem has been removed following its entry into a competition.

Certificate 12
Biography
Edinburgh Buses
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by scratch on
Twenty three words. Is that all there is there? No there is much more. Very good. First stanza is better than the second. But then again? Childs see saw/park, juxtaposed with the next ten words. Powerful economic writing. Now bugger off. :-)

 

Submitted by gerardineanne on
Very cleverly done.