Emma 4 Tom 4ever
By HaiAnh
Mon, 07 Jul 2008
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And those that his arm stiffened at
were the ones he knew by name.
For the students that had written
love into the wood, he flicked
a whim over like a pebble,
shot it into a promise.
One desk, with a stump fourth leg
fell uneasily in the rush with a thud.
An odd one, scratched with compasses,
tortured with acid and tong marks,
flung to the floor, now a blockade,
unwittingly heroic.
I am sure if felt as stunned as they did:
feeling the lash of the first bullet,
before their ribs swung open like bridges.
Eyes scrolling for something to fix on:
relationships begun, dates dug in
to the surface, chewing gum shunned,
windblown petals in each corner.
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This is excellent. Some
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This is excellent. Some fantastic lines. 'Ribs swung open like bridges' might be my favourite.
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