The Darkness Part One
By HeatherFeather
Tue, 10 Feb 2009
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The trees passed in blurs as I ran, I ran for my life. I heard it coming for me and I stopped frozen, as fear trickled like ice through my veins. I shut my eyes not wanting to see it and instead listened and I heard the sound of four large paws pounding upon the forest floor and the sharp intakes of ragged breathing. I took a deep, shuddering breath and I started to shake, it had finally found me. I turned to face it and saw a pair of menacing blood red eyes and long, dagger like white fangs that seemed to glisten in the moonlight. As I looked at it my knees buckled and I fell to the floor, I fell to death's feet.
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Ah, scary... wi ar worried!
Ah, scary... wi ar worried! Atho actually this is really good!
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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Very nicely written - you
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Very nicely written - you built the tension up beautifully. I'm going to read part two now.
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