The Swarm
By hilary west
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The Swarm
They were everywhere. John Bullman had never known anything like it. Yes, there had been summers when there had been a few flies in the house, but this was something else. And anyway it was autumn and getting colder, why weren’t these damn flies dying? Last week he had purchased a small box from a shop in the high street – a box that had a picture of a giant fly on its lid. And now John Bullman was wondering if this damn box had anything to do with the proliferation of flies in his house, was it hexed? He couldn’t offer any rational explanation. It was just a box with a fly on it, but somehow it now seemed a lot more menacing and not an innocent little box at all.
He’d bought several aerosol cans of insecticide, and now he was getting fed up. The more he zapped them the more they came back at him. It was like cutting the head off the hydra, more and more menace appeared . They seemed a much more virulent strain of fly. You got the impression of strength from them and that was disturbing, strength in numbers. There were thousands of them in the house and now he couldn’t cope. They were in his cups, his glasses, his plates on the table, all over the curtains, the walls, the furniture. It was truly gross and now John Bullman was becoming afraid, afraid they’d never go.
He had to be careful where he aimed the aerosol; there was the cat’s water bowl and food dish to consider, and now you would find tens of these horrible flies dead in the cat’s water bowl, or in the bottom of a cup. There would be several of these little black creatures in their death throes, but always there would be the swarming of the live ones, a fantastic buzz of life you couldn’t get away from. The buzz got more and more intense and John Bullman knew he was a victim of the humble housefly, a fly that was humble no longer, but a distinct threat to human life.
They were all over his face, his hands, his body, he couldn’t get away from them. They were ineluctable. His aunt had advised he get a bug bat when he’d told her about them, an instrument of torture he thought, but effective. The bat gave the flies an electric shock on contact. He went around the walls of his home placing the bat over them and seeing them drop dead to the floor, but he couldn’t do it fast enough, there were so many it was impossible. Soon the floor was covered with the corpses of these dead flies. The house was not his anymore. It belonged to flies, dead flies and awful, lingering and persistent live flies.
John Bullman felt he needed help, but the first thing he must do was get rid of that terrible box; maybe if he got rid of that the flies would go. He was sure there was something weird about it. Maybe he should have just placed the box in the rubbish bin outside, but no he decided to take it to a charity shop near to where he lived. He hated wasting anything and anyway the box couldn’t really have special powers over flies,could it? But it did seem as if it was a magnet to flies, but it was his imagination surely. The flies had nothing to do with this box, he must remain rational. Once he’d dumped the box he felt an immense sense of relief, but it was to be short-lived, when he got back to the house the flies were swarming everywhere. There seemed to be more not less now he had got rid of the box. He must contact pest control. He needed professional help. When he rang them on the phone they said they were extremely busy and it would be next week before they could call. He would wait, soon he would get the help he needed. But all the while he felt desperate inside; he felt hated and persecuted by this terrible evil, the evil of hordes of flies, which once unleashed were impossible to contain.
No longer a young man John Bullman began to feel weak, weak in the face of evil. He took to his bed, but the sheets were covered in flies; he was eating them when he licked his lips, swallowing them whole, choking on them. They had become a living nightmare. Great swathes of flies produced an overwhelming buzz, the deathly sinister sound of menace and of hate. Soon they covered every inch of John Bullman. And he became a corpse, a man that was killed by flies. Be very careful of what you buy in charity shops they might well possess no charity at all.
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Oh, HIlary, what a nightmare!
Oh, HIlary, what a nightmare! If real life, I would say, 'Go find a friend! somewhere to stay, or someone to come and help.' But I still think of it as a nightmare, and certainly no mystic evil powers to boxes! Rhiannon
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The plague of flies was sent
The plague of flies was sent to Pharoah because he refused to obey God. If we love God and are sorry for our failings and want his forgiveness, he may sometimes have to chasten us (eg give us some difficulties to teach us to return to him) when we get forgetful of his will and ignoring him, but that is not a form of punishment. If we believe, Jesus has paid the punishments for our sins. I'll pray with you for peace and a solution to your infestation, must be very stressful! Rhiannon
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Hilary, you poor thing! You
Hilary, you poor thing! You have really brought to life the horror of fly infestations. It happened to me once and it was absolutely horrible - actually had me in tears. We tried everything - all those electronic devices, swats - I wouldn't use sprays because of pets and like you, there were just so many of them I felt I'd just be filling our house with cans and cans of it, but that's what the neighbours said they used. The only thing that reduced the numbers for me were those awful sticky tapes. My house was festooned with them like some macabre party decoration - it was just horrible! In the end they just disappeared - I think it was from some kind of farm nearby, and I had flyscreens fitted so it could never happen again. Sometimes it's because there's something dead in your attic, or perhaps your cat has caught something and hidden the body somewhere? You have all my sympathy and I hope they disappear soon for you too
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For the sticky tapes try the
For the sticky tapes try the very cheap shops - the pound ones. Or I bet Ebay or Amazon have them. I wouldn't go looking for bodies in the attic either (even bird bodies!). Good luck anyway - I hope you get some peace soon
edit: Amazon have lots - they're mostly very cheap:
https://www.amazon.co.uk/s/ref=nb_sb_noss_1?url=search-alias%3Daps&field...
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Hi Hilary,
Hi Hilary,
reading this gave me the shivers, I can't stand one fly leave alone that many. I did have a similar experience with flees. But flies seem worse because they're almost impossible to catch.
I read that this is happening to you. I really do hope that the flies disappear very soon, you certainly don't deserve this at all.
Take care Hilary.
Jenny.
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Ooft, this is super grim.
Ooft, this is super grim. Quite an edgar allan poe vibe. Very effective piece, freaked me out. I hope your own fly-related problems are resolved :)
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