Luck (part II)
By Jake76
Sun, 01 Feb 2015
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Please read part I to understand this .
Luck (Part II)
Jake was feeling a lot of things sick , uncomfortable and very cold and much more. His chest was almost showing from his battered shirt.
Jessica was now in front of Jake she put a pistol on the desk. " I'm sorry Jake" Said Jessica. " I swear I don't remember anything from the attic" Jake replied looking into Jessica's eyes. Jake was finding it hard to not look at Jessica's bra as a bit of it was poking out he wanted to make her aware of it but had other things on his mind like trying to stay alive.
" Jake listen I'm going to talk to some people to see what we can do , I'll see you soon" as soon as Jessica left with the pistol tucked into her skirt two suited muscular men walked into the room. Jake thought he was underground as there was no windows in the room all he knew was he was in m.i5 somewhere and about to be executed. Only a miracle could save him. Shivering Jake asked one of the suited men " what's gonna happen to me " ? It was as if Jake was invisible the men didn't even look at Jake.
Jake got up to stretch his legs but he suited men thought he was doing otherwise they forced him back into his seat.
Jake was very tired and dropped his head onto the table. One of the men stormed towards Jake and pulled his hair up. Jake again was forced to sit upright. Jake couldn't do anything but hope.
The door opened Jake didn't dare to look behind him. " ma'am wants him in Thomas's room" A squeeky voice said.
" we'll be there in a minute" one of the suited men replied. Jake was forced out of his seat. " listen kid keep your head down and don't try anything funny" one of the men said blindfolding Jake. Jake was being taken to Thomas. So he thought.
Jake was thrown into what felt like another room. "Hello" Jake said. " can I take this off my eyes now plea.. " before Jake could finish his shakey tonned sentence Jessica had lightly removed Jakes blindfold. Jessica was sitting on a table in front Jake looking into his eyes with her legs crossed . A dark haired man in his 40's stood leaning on the desk in front of Jake wearing leather gloves.
The two adults stood silent looking into James's eyes. Jake didn't know where to look. There were reports of James on the desk. "I'm going back to check on Lucy" said Jessica.
It was now the Dark haired man and Jake left in the medium sized room.
"I'm sorry Thomas" begged Jake The dark haired man laughed " I'm not Thomas , the guards couldn't and wouldn't dare say my real name " Jake honestly didn't care about this mans name he cared about his life.
" I know your confused " the dark haired man said. Jake nodded slowly trying to read the files concerning him upside down. " I'll take those" the man took the files off the desk. " I wont be a minute , want a drink " ?
Jake nodded " I'll drink anything thanks "
3 minutes later..
"Thanks" Jake said with a warm cup of coffee in his hand it smelt funny. I've been drugged Jake thought but why ? Jake tried to remain casual and calm.
Jake had drank half the of the coffee his eyes were turning blurry. Jake collapsed onto the hard surface but the Dark haired man had held enough of Jake to stop him banging his head.
Jake woke up. Jake didn't know how long he had been asleep for. He was butt naked in what looked like a celebrity's hotel room. Jakes back and arms had pink lines on them. He wasn't surprised when he saw some bruises as well.
Jake was happy to see a window in this room. There was an envelope beside Jake. Inside was another envelope.
There was a knock on the door. " Room service " The voice at the door sounded familiar. " Could you come back later " ? Jake asked. Jake saw a key go through the door holee he hid the envelope under his pillow.
The door opened.
It was the dark haired man from m.i5
He locked the door behind him. Jake honestly didn't feel comfortable being naked in a locked room with a man stronger and older than him.
" We don't have much time , have you opened the envelope " ? The man said peeking out the window.
" I've seen the key but I was about to open the second envelope but you came". The man eyed Jake he could tell Jake was scared. " open the second envelope , whilst I get you something to wear" the man said.
The man left and Jake did as he was told. Jake opened the second envelope. He was getting frustrated as there was another envelope. He opened the third envelope and saw a little letter. Jake read the important highlighted sections.
Jake finished reading the letter and was stunned. He couldn't believe What he read. M.i5 were going to train him and a few others to become the best spies there could be.
Jake was intelligent and he knew what to do with the letter. Jake took the letter the to hotel rooms toilet ripped up the letter and flushed it down the loo.
Jake stayed in the loo trying to take in what he read. He needed to see Jessica and Lucy. As James was about to return to the bed the Dark haired man was forced into the room by two armed men. Jake tried to remain calm peeking through the door.
" where is the boy " ? One of the men asked in a Albanian accent. Darren the dark haired man didn't reply. Jake saw one of the Albanians attach a silencer to what looked like a m9. Darren was pushed to the ground. Jake knew what was going to happen. Jake couldn't and wouldn't let this happen. " last chance where is that blonde shit". " I'm here said" James with a towel around him which he found in the bathroom.
Jake walked slowly towards the Albanian that wasn't holding Darren. Jake saw that this Albanians weapon did not have a silencer. When Jake was close enough he launched himself at the Albanian. Jakes towel feel off his hips. Jake had stunned the Albanian. The gun was knocked out the Albanians hand Jake made sure he got to the gun first.
Darren had forced the Albanian about to execute him onto the wall. Darren was in an intense struggle with the over weight Albanian.
Jake had gun bucked the Albanian he had stunned. Jake didn't want to shoot the gun as it would of attracted a lot of attention. Jake had turned his attention to Darren's fight for to long the other Albanian had got up and threw Jake on the bed. There were clothes on the bed it was probably the clothes Darren had got for Jake.
Jake laid on his stomach naked with a gun to his head. Jake didn't know what to expect the two Albanians were shouting in Albanian.
Jake used the back of his head to to smash the one of the Albanians forhead. Darren threw Jake the m9 with the silencer Jake turned and got a clean headshot at the Albanian with the smashed for head. Jake fired two more bullets to his chest to make sure he was a gooner. Jake felt like James Bond.
Jake remembered he was naked and turned pink. Darren ordered Jake to give him the gun. Jake gave Darren the gun and got dressed. There was a t shirt , pair of blue light jeans , and running shoes as well as a pair of clean white boxers.
Darren dragged the over weight Albanian to the bathroom. Jake knew what was happening Darren was going to interrogate and execute the over weight Albanian.
Jake searched the dead body of the Albanian he killed he found what looked like car keys and a Nokia phone. Darren came out with blood stained hands " we're leaving and now " Darren said.
Darren and Jake left the once spotless hotel room. " His phones here and I think these are care keys" said Jake , " you clever lad " smiled " keep hold of them" Darren smiled with his yellow teeth.
Jake and Darren were jogging down the hotel hallway. " Elevator " ? Asked Jake " your call " replied Darren
Jake pushed the button to call the elevator. Jake had a funny feeling in his tummy. " Darren go to the other side of the elevator " said Jake
The elevator doors opened 3 armed Albanians raced out not noticing Darren nor Jake. Jake and Darren opened fire whilst entering the elevator. The elevator was going down. " Who are these guys" ? Asked Jake checking his ammo. Darren ignored Jake and got his radio out " Darren here I need an evac now" !
Jake thought the elevator was going to the ground floor however Darren decided press the b button. " Basement " ? Asked Jake . " soon as the doors open get to cover" replied Darren
The elevator doors opened. Jake was surprised to see a parking lot. Two Mercedes Benz jeeps raced into the parking lot. Within seconds almost 8 Albanians jump out the vehicles and started firing at the elevator.
Jake ran low out the elevator to a parked Nissan to his left. Darren ran and took cover at a bmw to his right.
Between Jake and Darren they had 18 bullets left.
Darren showed skill with his shooting and took down 5 Albanians within a few seconds. Jake was trying to take the silencer off his m9. " Jake come on " screamed Darren
One Albanian saw Darren wasn't focussing and made a run towards him Darren performed something amazing a no look headshot.
An engine sound was coming into the parking lot. Jake threw Darren his gun and Darren threw Jake his.
A mini truck smashed its way into the parking lot. Darren was struggling to remove the silencer.
The mini van came to a halt it had almost 9 armed men including the driver. Jake took aim at the mini vans exhaust pipe and fired.
The mini van blew up.
Darren seemed impressed. Darren had removed the silencer. Darren and Jake were making a move for the main entrance.
Darren was screaming over his radio " just bloody land it at the main entrance before more of em get here " !
Jake looked into the sky there was a huge helicopter armed with two heavy machine guns. The helicopter couldn't land instead a ladder was dropped. Darren and Jake both hanged on.
" move this thing " Darren screamed looking at the numerous Albanians closing in.
To be continued ..
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Gentle Advice
Hello Jake and welcome to ABCtales.
You'll find that the best way to get feedback and opinions on your work is to first comment on the work of others. If you do I guarrantee that other writers will respond in like. Giving a shout-out like this, however well-intended, is likely to be unproductive.
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Here's the deal Jake
Here are two links.
http://www.abctales.com/story/ben-banyard/wet-rot
http://www.abctales.com/story/markbrown/reparations
The first one is a poem and the second one is a story. If you take the time and trouble to read these two pieces and offer some considered, thoughtful and helpful feedback on both, I will provide you with a close critique of your story.
Do we have a deal?
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