Thinkthinkthink!
By Kahdai
Tue, 16 Feb 2010
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My brain is buzzing,
my hands are shaking,
my pencil is tapping,
but I just can't think!
Staring at a blank page,
Scribbles down the side,
ehffing clock ticking,
brain is going blind.
Anything, everything,
nothing will fit here,
mind wandering elswhere,
concentrate, it's near!
Panicking, frustrated,
so close to my ideal,
rushing, heart racing,
how stupid do I feel?
Stop trying so hard,
you're trying to think,
go away for a while,
make a nice, hot drink
relax, calm down, resume
Ah! C-C , Con-tin-ues!!
That is the word! Relief!
excitment! Es i fihnite!
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I'm so happy that my poem
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I'm so happy that my poem inspired you Kahdai! And this is a wondeful poem - very rhythmical! I just noticed a typo - 'panicing' should be 'panicking' ;)
Magic xxx
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