Spirit's kiss
By keleph
Thu, 29 May 2008
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When late evening's breadth lays you in its wake
And sparkling summer stream stagnates in a lake,
silence, in a blanket roasts the air
thoughts, like paper, scratch and tear
My soul is stretched to breaking.
My madness is awak'ing
Like a cyclops, plodding, from a cave
Or Medusa screaming from her grave...
or a bad poem written upon a receipt
for last week's bread and tomorrow's meat.
At night, natural hands knock upon my door
While clouds toss and turn and drift no more,
toward sunsets, hopes and sweet embraces
My Guest is fair, with many faces,
She brings both love and death
I'll taste them both upon her breath
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'thoughts, like paper,
'thoughts, like paper, scratch and tear'
love this line!
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I love 'silence, in a
Permalink Submitted by onemorething on
I love 'silence, in a blanket roasts the air'. I read something very interesting in an essay by Borges today...he was talking about rhyme and that the reason he disliked it was that it tempted poets to write needless lines or use unsuitable words. I don't think you have here. Boredom is a good thing at times.
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That poem is so close to
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That poem is so close to being really really good.
'Can you really be bored when writing a poem? If not, is boredom impossible to capture in poetry?'
:D
well what is boredom? if it evokes emotion, it can be captured in a poem.
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