The first train
By love_writing
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He pushes her over the top
of the high mesh fence
it droops, sags
she hears the rip of her denims
tear an L shape
steadying herself, she jumps down at his command
her ankles buckling
in front of her a high slope of grey stones;
hard, pointy edges, dark diamond shapes.
Him; freckles, ginger, funny name
old fashioned. Clive or something,
jumps over sveltely- without breath
grabs at her white vest,
hands up pulling apart her trainer bra
yanks at her stone wash jeans,
unzips, sounds like a leather whip
as the belt flicks her bare stomach
tongue intrusion, wet, slurp, licks her face like a
bulldog
pulls her down by the hooks of her jeans
on to the rock hard hillside
as the first train hurls past.
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No idea why no comments -
No idea why no comments - gritty bare truths to the weight of the trains. It's abrupt and grainy - works as it's supposed to.
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