Shadow
By Lupensai
Mon, 29 Oct 2012
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Bound at the foot are you and I.
You are forced to be my ally,
Against the ones who laugh and joke,
Against the ones who make me choke.
But you, Dark One, cast down from me
Who mocks me with his mimicry,
You wish to cut the binding ties
And free yourself from my great lies.
I am alone, without a friend.
Is this my life? Is this the end?
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Very dark and sad Lupensai,
Very dark and sad Lupensai, Peter Pan made up with his shadow I'm sure you will be able to, Love the use of imagery here my favourite line " Bound at the foot are you and I, You are forced to be my ally" very good x
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I agree thecure, the first
I agree thecure, the first stanza grabs hard.
Well done lupensai.
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