"Here....." ( A Poet Answers "The Walker" by Bee)

By MarciaMarcia

Thu, 21 Jan 2016
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"Here....."                            ("A Poet Answers 'The Walker' by Bee")

 

words 

spoken

speak 

strength

strengthen.....will

miles walked

sand's shores

.....rock

tumbled tides

worn

well

steadied 

pace.....

in midst

of swirling

shifting

lifting

thoughts.....

reaching

touching

lighted

grace....

there.....

here.....

a grateful

place.....

of welling

fullness

drifting

sleepy

awakening

space.....

held 

in holding.......time

words 

cause

deep inside

longing pang

pause

a pressured

precious

presence.....

 

your's in mine..........

                                                    MarciaMarcia

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Hi Bee.....

   I was so very moved by your Poem "The Walker"....that I could only comment with a poem ....back to you....inspired by your words. 

Was this OK with you ? I've done this in response to "Lavadis" submissions. 

I see that you continue to post  your stories and poems. I interpret this as a sign of your recovering energy,  which continues to fuel your spirited words, within your sharing

all that becomes......"Bee's Journey"   Bravo !!!!!

Thank You......MarciaMarcia