Pass...

Hi Maisie

  I appreciate your comment. I have thought a lot about why I put each word by itself on its own line. Please know that there is a depth of message, story,  in each of my pieces I write. And of course, some are more successful than others. I want to give the reader space, to explore their own phrasing of the words, their own rhythm of the read, because, finding my intention of the piece, or their own, personal discovery of what the piece is saying to them, is what makes a journey of reading to me  

so the meaning is somewhat hidden, for you to find  

For you, I will post the same piece, "pass..." Written with phrasing which is my intention of its meaning. 

    Thanks for being really honest Maisie.  MarciaMarcia