the We of We
By MarciaMarcia
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we didn't know
time would steal
love's given
wonder
turned
surreal
learned
beneath
ill's
faded face
there
forced
a wedge
blocking pace
between
the
We of We
child's child
betrayed
all three
hidden
beneath
the loss
of you
under
covered
heart
displays
how
Two
endure
ill's severed
cradle rock
reprieved
when
time's away...
in future present
One
awaits
at
threshold's
door ajar
and sees
illusion...
from afar
uncover
deeply lain
mossed leaves
of shattered pain...
set free
when self
made true
is known to you
imagined well
in spite of three
uncovered...
time
stands stilled...then moves
you make your way
back
to me... to my Shalev
the We of We MarciaMarcia November 2015
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Love the last few lines. Sums
Love the last few lines. Sums it all up.
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"Deeply lain mossed leaves of
"Deeply lain mossed leaves of shattered pain". This describes so accurately the concealment and exposure of old emotional wounds.
I hope the wish expressed in the last verse is fulfilled.
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Wonderful!
Wonderful!
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