LOL! Part One. Edited in my own words....

By Maxine Jasmin-Green

Mon, 13 Jan 2025
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She suffered domestic abuse and violence.

After she became pregnant, the abuse continued.

The abuse including regular hair pulling and slaps.

In her suicide note on her phone she wrote, she made her thoughts  very clear. She said who killed her or why she killed herself. She named the man that abused her Ryan Wellings. He was no good, and he wanted to make sure she felt the same. 

His defence was DAFT! He did not think how he teated her was that bad, even when she had to go to hospital! He was arristed, but got out, the police, they are been investigated, because of this, four days later she took her own life!!! 

I hope when he goes to jail, that he will get a taste of his own medicine!!!  

In my view he should be given bread and water!

She has left her eight-month-old daughter.

He also Battered his ex-girl friend before this.

With all that evidence he has been convicted not of murder, nor manslaughter but assault and  domestic violence.

Let’s hope when he is sentenced, he will experience, what it feels like in jail, to experience, what  .

Kiena Dawes went through. RIP 

E&OE.       

 

 

          

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

This is such a sad story - poor woman. Are you quoting from a news website either fully or partly Maxine? If so, you'll need to add quotation marks and a source/credit. Thank you

 

Submitted by Maxine Jasmin-Green on

Yes, it is sad, that she was worn down SO much she had to leave her baby. It is her Mum and Sister I feel sorry for.

Yes I quote from the on line Independent newpaper. 

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Thanks for letting me know. So if you've just cut and pasted from The Independent - copied it word for word, not just the odd sentence, I'm afraid you'll have to edit it all out. You can describe what happened in your own words instead if you like, and you can include what the defendant said in court, with quotation marks, but you can't just take someone else's work and paste it onto our site - it will be copyrighted by the Independent. It will need to be removed by tomorrow afternoon in accordance with our 24 hour takedown policy.

 

Submitted by Maxine Jasmin-Green on

Ok, I will use my own words I will edit it now.

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Thank you!

 

Submitted by Maxine Jasmin-Green on

I have done what you asked.

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Thank you very much for changing it so promptly Maxine

 

Submitted by Maxine Jasmin-Green on

You are Welcome.

 

Submitted by onemorething on

Maxine, sorry to pick up on another thing, but the photo of mouldy bread that you've put with this is an alamy stock photo and these are generally charged for and not in the public domain. I wonder if you could remove it and /or replace it with one that is freely available to use. We can get into trouble for using images that we don't personally own or aren't in the public domain. Thank you in advance. 

 

Submitted by Maxine Jasmin-Green on

I get all my pictures from "Pixaby free to download" that is what I typed in If you type it in, you will get the same thing. I have removed it and will also remove it from the other story that I wrote yesterday.

MJG

 

Submitted by onemorething on

Thank you. The fact that it had a black strip underneath the photo which said 'Alamy' on it suggested to me that it was from Alamy's stock photos. 

 

Submitted by Maxine Jasmin-Green on

No problem.

Is there a free site that you can recommend I use? Then I will use that instead. Thank you.

MJG 

 

Submitted by onemorething on

As Paul has suggested below, my general go to is wikimedia commons. 

 

Submitted by Maxine Jasmin-Green on

Thank you. x

 

Submitted by Maxine Jasmin-Green on

I hope this picture is OK, let me know if it is not and I will remove it.  If you can let me know of a site that I can get pictures that are all kosher to use, please can you let me know. Thank you.

MJG  

 

Submitted by marandina on

Hi Maxine

 

I use Wiki images - loads of free stuff on there. Dunno if that helps

 

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Images

 

Submitted by Maxine Jasmin-Green on

Thank you SO much for the info, you are a Gem. I will take a look later on today.

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