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By mrpeterjthomas

Tue, 10 May 2016
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Tomorrow calls

As midnight falls,

Darkness consumes the light,

Tomorrow's here

It's my worse fear,

I still feel far from right............

Certificate 12
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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I like the simplicity, clarity, concisness of your writing.

When troubled, there is delight in the break from pressures in the nighttime, and the hope to feel stronger when rising next day. But the help for perseverance through whatever, is still available, but it can feel a heavy prospect. 'Take my yoke upon you' said Jesus ie he does take the weight if we yoke up to him! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by mrpeterjthomas on

thank you