Snow Fairy

By Nikki A

Sun, 08 Jan 2012

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5 comments

The snow fairy flutters her icy wings
Cold Winters Lace
Lazily falls down from the winter sky
Laughing she twirls as winter swirls
The snow Fairys are out to play
Can you find them in winter's dance?

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I painted a great picture of

Permalink Submitted by Nikki A on Sun, 2012-01-08 16:31

I painted a great picture of a snow fairy and had to write a poem about her.

What can I say Nikki A? this

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Sun, 2012-01-08 17:00

What can I say Nikki A? this is so wonderful, it bought a tear to my eye as I read, being an absolute fan of fairies. Brillllllllliant! read and thankyou for sharing. Jenny.

Thank you, I had fun writing

Permalink Submitted by Nikki A on Mon, 2012-01-09 15:26

Thank you, I had fun writing it. I love fairies too!

Hi there, Nikki;-) I very

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Sun, 2012-01-08 18:00

Hi there, Nikki;-) I very much enjoyed this. A small point though. You don't need the apostrophe in 'The snow fairys are out to play', as it is plural, but you do need one in 'winter's dance' because it is possessive. Your poem paints a very pleasant winter's scene. Tina

Thanks for that. I've

Permalink Submitted by Nikki A on Mon, 2012-01-09 15:27

Thanks for that. I've already fixed it. Really appreciated that.