The Courtship of Lapwings

Gold cherry

By onemorething

Thu, 11 Jul 2019
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Your love is kamikaze,

you show me your beating

heart and black wing,

a dangerous, 

rapturous 

lust

in 

free 

fall, 

exalting cry to the air,

trembling there, 

spinning, rolling,

crest dazzling:

you dive bomb me

with devotion.

Certificate 15
Poem
Romance

Comments

Submitted by YaseminB on

I have read this poem over and over. it is so wonderful! extraordinary!  Very well done!

 

Yasemin Balandi

Submitted by Kris on

I've been meaning to write a note here for while.....

There's really nothing I can add to the many compliments & accolades of your works.

I'm not here to, kiss-up, because you are very influential here....

My point is..... I'm a fan & reader of your works... And I think I caught myself, like, mimicking your style abit in some my character descriptions... not a poet at all, for sure a rookie, read allot here, but its the Poets that soul move & inspire me.... Thx..

Just say'n, had to say it.....

K 

 

Submitted by onemorething on

Thanks so much! Such compliments - all very kind, all very lovely, thank you x