Two brothers
By Parson Thru
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We sit together
Two brothers
Rough wall at our backs
Air filled with sound
Engines, gears, tyres, brakes
Taste
Exhaust, diesel, rubber
Feet hustling
Soles, hard and soft
Trousers, ankles, calves
Hems of coats
Shining asphalt
Pools of sodium
Concrete doorway
Aching, draw my knees up
Jeans torn and shiny, stained
Beside me, legs outstretched
Stares at ankles, crossed
Brogues, cracked and found
Passes jug
Fumbling, I accept
Hand beneath the base
Fingers through the loop
Rest on forearm
Glass taps teeth
Drink flowing over tongue
Swallow breathe and swallow
Wipe mouth on hand
Fumes in nose
In head
Hand it back
Hey
What
Got a smoke
Somewhere
Try pocket
Screwed up rag
Two pens, one blue one black
Other pocket
Carton, squashed
Draw it out
Open with one hand
Brown filters, one… five
First bent, torn
Should I
No
Second bent, smokable
Hand it over
Got a light
Jacket pocket
Under carton
No
Just a minute
Left jeans
Key to someone’s flat
Lean away
Right pocket
Plastic lighter, warm
Pass it over
Thanks
It flares
Eyes moist and red
Real Madrid
I found it
Where
Passes cigarette
I take it
Nowhere
Draw in smoke
Tip flares, alive
Hold in lungs
Hold, hold
Plume slow from nostrils
Hand it back
Keep hand out, beckon
What
Lighter
Grips smoke between lips
Pats pockets
Don’t know, man
Beckoning
Why so materialistic
Forget it
Hold on
Forget it
Cars faster now
Scooters, motorcycles
Fewer shoes passing
Buses blasting air and noise
Street settles to its flow
Jug held out
Thanks
You ok
I’m ok
You sure
I’m sure
Tap teeth again
Shit
Someplace to crash
Nope
How about here
You kidding
Damn this jug
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How are you?
How are you?
Bit confused in this at the end about which person said what? This bit felt very real
Passes jug
Fumbling, I accept
Hand beneath the base
Fingers through the loop
Rest on forearm
Glass taps teeth
Drink flowing over tongue
Swallow breathe and swallow
Wipe mouth on hand
Fumes in nose
In head
Hand it back
the whole thing had the feeling of smoke, a memory that would have blown away but you wrote it, so it stays like a photo of an instant, only with all the extra underneath things of a poem?
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