Competition entry: Enduring Freedom
By Peter Branson
Mon, 12 Sep 2011
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Enduring Freedom
“Three children playing with a shell were blown
to bits in Helmand Province yesterday.”
Back home three others mourn a father’s death.
“Murder of innocence!” the headline shouts.
“Where is he now?” one asks. “In heaven, love,”
they say. “With freedom there’s a price to pay.”
Everything’s relative, God only knows.
Will it bear fruit, this cross of sacrifice?
The town is quietened while the piper plays
Amazing Grace. Along High Street, folk pause,
watch loved ones toss red roses at the hearse,
turn back into their lives. Graveside, Last Post
is sounding, drowns in silence at flood tide.
Six riflemen fire blanks. There’s no reply.
Peter Branson
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A poignant and thought
A poignant and thought provoking piece.
Will there ever be an end to it all.
ScoZen
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new Peter Branson A well
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Peter Branson
A well true piece of writing.
As ScoZen. says. mentions Helmand Province
lot of lost lives and injuries there,
very sad. When will Peace reign!
Stop the weapons, so many have suffered.
It cannot go on and on! Must find other ways,
talking helping and doing and discussions on
future children and people, bring World Peace
Very well explained, and good one comp; entry.
cavalcaderl julie
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yes I agree with ScoZen-
yes I agree with ScoZen- thought provoking.. good luck in the competition
;)Pia
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A well written piece -
Permalink Submitted by Dave Flanagan on
A well written piece - Enduring Freedom maybe, certainly enduring something at the moment...
All the best.
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