'the hot life'
By seannelson
Wed, 13 Jan 2016
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'the hot life'
will kiss your lips,
turn your head
grab your chin
burn your eyes
and shed your skin
like a bad disguise
that...
everyone buys
because we've all
already
paid that price
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Hi Sean.
Hi Sean.
I liked this so much - especially the first five lines. From there, it is based on a single (I) rhyme. I loved the brevity and meaning.
Bee
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I agree with Bee. I like the structure of the poem and the sting of the message!
Sim
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Fast-paced, quirky, witty. I
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Fast-paced, quirky, witty. I like it.
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