Love is...

Cherry
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By shoe

Tue, 03 Oct 2017
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Pure blue ocean deep
Cupping heaven
or the opposite of heaven

October rain at the window
A pointillistic garden 
when you stop trying to see the garden

Sometimes...

The drip, drip, drip
of a leaking tap 
wearing a groove
The plughole sucking

Certificate PG
Poem
Some kind of poetry
Love

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

The title suggests something a bit hackneyed - but actually this isn't at all - it's very sharp! I particularly like the image of the garden pointillism

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I always see images in your poems shoe.

There's something pensive about this one conjuring up the scene of a woman stood at her sink, gazing out the window, not seeing her garden but longing for the ocean and her lover.

Enjoyed reading.

Jenny.