Girl with Blue Eyes
By Silver Spun Sand
Sat, 03 Jul 2010
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She never missed a trick...
no thoughts could he disguise,
nor misdemeanours hope to hide
those eyes would not detect.
Blue, they were, as the bars
on the wings of a jaybird;
clear as crystal ribbons
that trickle down the Ben
and as deep as any ocean.
He grew wise – careful
not to swim out of his depth;
but the rip-tide
got him in the end.
In her arms, given half
the chance, he’d have died
a million deaths.
“What she didn’t know
about the kiss of life,
wasn’t worth the knowing,”
so he said.
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Wow, I read this as kind of
Wow, I read this as kind of spooky Tina & I like it! It has a little magic in it aswell. Kahdai xx
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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This girl with blue eyes
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This girl with blue eyes enjoyed this poem immensely, dear Tina! Especially this stanza:
'He grew wise – careful
not to swim out of his depth;
but the rip-tide
got him in the end.'
Some really perfect images here which I'm sure most people can relate to - we've all fallen in too deep at some point! I love the sense of martyrdom too. Beautifully captured ;)
Magic xxx
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I echo magic's comment i
I echo magic's comment i know i've fallen in too deep i'm sure nearly all of us have. I love the images in this one, top class. Another beautiful poem which paints an ordinary scene with such vivid colours and emotion. Beeme xx
k.
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Blue eyes are cruel blue
Blue eyes are cruel blue eyes are eerie blue eyes she’s on acid,
never trust blue eyes,
“What she didn’t know
about the kiss of life,
wasn’t worth the knowing,”
so he said.
Give me warm soft brown eyes, kind gentle eyes, a pair of sparrows puffed against the winter chill, a warm cottage, crackling flames
warm soup and fresh bread &&
Yes loved your poem Tina!
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