The Hours
By Silver Spun Sand
Sun, 03 Jan 2016
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When days were long I took the role
of feckless youth, disdainful of dew drenched
daisy-dappled meadows –
the air, drier than trenchant teasel-heads –
thistles coruscate the field as cobra’s fangs
through stubble...nothing is spared,
not even poppies which stare with eyes,
black and beautiful as sin.
Only weeds, I remind myself, knowing
she would have said,
‘A weed is merely a flower growing
in a place of its own choosing’
and then she springs to life before me;
an aura of ambergris – slices an indifferent sea
of violet vetch, feathers a tilted path, coveted
by a coven of shadows;
yet I know it is she, her feet, unlike
the cloven hoofed deer, leave no trace
of their swift passage through the pearly grass,
a hand, beckoning...beckoning
a child to her mother
and I am stilled by the wonder.
As days grow shorter she turns to leave – stoops
through pallid morning light, a kiss to blow,
a lone Christmas Rose leans with her;
but bends not – her shadow.
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'A weed is merely a flower growing
in a place of its own choosing’ That's what my grandmother used to say. There's a lesson in there.
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