The Fairies Will Fly Tonight

By skinner_jennifer

Thu, 01 Sep 2011
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17 comments
 

In the deepest depths of the Forest
there was much darkness - but every
now and again small lights would
appear exposing their beauty...

luminous - floating in and out and
between boughs of trees - where wild
sage and mint flourish and mushrooms
and toadstools are in abundance...

this place is safe from the hands of
humans - though animal footprints do
prevail, the only sounds are the
cracking of twigs and bats take flight,

the secrets that the Forest hold...
are treasures like precious diamonds,
unhindered by man - so focus on the
light, a fluorescent glimmmer of hope -
the Fairies will fly tonight.

Certificate PG
Poem
Poems
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Gosh, Jenny - I do hope they do;-) Seriously though, a lovely poem and you paint a colourful picture with your words, especially here:- "luminous - floating in and out and between boughs of trees - where wild sage and mint flourish and mushrooms and toadstools are in abundance...". Very much enjoyed, and I shall keep a look-out tonight;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Nice the fairies have their special place not touched by humans. It's lovely to imagine it and you gave a great picture. ;)Pia

Submitted by MaggieG on
*smiles* This has the makings of a lovely children's book in my opinion Enjoyed the read :)

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina, I'm really pleased you liked this piece, my imagination was really working overtime with the thought of these beautiful lights. Now I wonder if you saw any luminous lights last night! Thankyou for reading and leaving a comment, always appreciated. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Pia, glad you could get the picture of the forest untouched by humans, it's kind of how I think, it's where the fairies would be. Hope you are well and thankyou for reading. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi there MaggieG, you know, you could be right, I never thought of a childrens story coming out of this piece, but I will have to give it some thought, trouble is there has been so many childrens stories about fairies, it would take a lot of thought. Anyway thankyou so much for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed reading. Jenny.

 

Submitted by msiagirl on
I really loved the stanza that began with "luminous lights" - fairies are always a favourite of mine, so pleased to find them here in your pristine forest.

Submitted by MaggieG on
"trouble is there has been so many childrens stories about fairies, it would take a lot of thought." Here's a quote I love " Everything has already been said. What is important now is HOW you say it "

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thankyou for reading msiagirl, I'm really glad that you liked the luminous lights and that you enjoy fairies too. Have a good Sunday. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
MaggieG, I totally agree with you, it's not what you say, but the way you say it. Thankyou for your quote, I'll bare it in mind. Jenny.

 

Submitted by prettyrose on
Jenny again straightforward to read yet a brilliant piece written with care and love. Just great :) Keep Writing Keep Smiling :))

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Prettyrose, thankyou so much again for the really nice comment. It was a pleasure to write this piece, with my love of fairies, as much as it's a pleasure to recieve your wonderful comments. Thankyou so much. Jenny.

 

Submitted by cormacru999 on
you write about Faeries too! it was a beautiful little piece, drew me right into it and made me picture everything you mentioned. really nice.

Nicholas Schoonbeck

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi cormacru999, thankyou so much for reading my poem here and yes I too adore faeries, I think they are all part of nature and nature is something I love aswell. I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading this and again thankyou for letting me know. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Lovely Jenny, very secret and magical!

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai, you took the words right out of my mouth, 'secret and magical,' a lovely description. Thankyou again for your thoughts and for reading. Hope you are having a good week and a peaceful Monday. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
not peaceful atall! dont worry order will be restored

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "