America

By Steve

Mon, 15 Jun 2009
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There is no other county as diverse
as floating on bliss, surfers
tiding the coast, like men and women
dreamsing of freedom.

skateboarders jumping over the seas of beauty.
skating down and flipping into tricks of cerebral wonder. American, the soul of love, the brilliant
wonderful explosions of the firefrackers,
google, free soup kitchens and stone soup poets.

Let the souls of the dead fly and complete,
the laughter of divine energy,
after after after the spitits shall see the skeleton damasked with death.

Certificate 15
Poem
Drama

Comments

Submitted by Jupiter on
Gosh Steve, hope you aren't the all new american 'believe in us' 'divine' squaddy vanguard. Can't imagine why anyone would write such stuff otherwise - but I am a simple lad and your Growl which includes "I ask for Justice, for Christ's left hand to lift up and destroy them." leaves me somewhat cold - sorry - absolutely frozen to minus a trillion - for I am one of the ungodfearing masses. I could offer advice but you are so far beyond, that all I can offer is an early morning wake up call. Instead here is a link to a level headed american: http://abctales.com/user/pinda

Submitted by Steve on
I don't like level haeaded Americans. I'm short. I see things from a different viewpoint.

 

Submitted by Jupiter on
Short?