Island Hideaway 40 - You can see the sea
By Terrence Oblong
Mon, 20 Jan 2020
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"I can't believe you own this island, it's beautiful. And you own the dodos. Every dodo in the world belongs to you."
"No, I just own the island. The dodos belong to themselves."
"Now the Boatman had seen Mo there was no reason not to go out in daylight."
"It takes a lot of work. The paths soon become overgrown."
"But you're surrounded by sea. You can walk round and round the coastal path and see sea everywhere you go."
"Did you miss the sea when you left Swansea?"
"I missed it like crazy. Christ, corporate life, it's a mad world. I missed lots of things."
Did you miss me, I thought, but didn't say, for I already knew the answer.
xxx
"No, I just own the island. The dodos belong to themselves."
"Now the Boatman had seen Mo there was no reason not to go out in daylight."
"It takes a lot of work. The paths soon become overgrown."
"But you're surrounded by sea. You can walk round and round the coastal path and see sea everywhere you go."
"Did you miss the sea when you left Swansea?"
"I missed it like crazy. Christ, corporate life, it's a mad world. I missed lots of things."
Did you miss me, I thought, but didn't say, for I already knew the answer.
xxx
The beach was our confessional. We would take long walks at night, just the two of us, and reveal our innermost woes, amid the usual silliness, gossip, politics and puns.
"Julie's left me," I would confess to her.
"Which one's Julie?"
"The one from the writers group."
"The one you've fancied for months."
"Yes." That Julie.
"I didn't know you were going out."
"We went out on Saturday. I persuaded her to see a film and we went for a drink afterwards."
"Well?"
"She left me on Sunday."
"And?" Even though I couldn't see her face in the clouded night I knew her expression, eager, interested, interrogative. 'Did you?' is what she wanted to know.
"I stayed at hers," I said, using the most neutral words I could find.
"Yay! You shagged Julie. You've been dying to do that."
"I suppose," I said. "But it couldn't have been a great shag, she left me the next day."
"Oh well," Mo said.
"Oh well," I said.
We walked over a mile in complete silence between her 'Oh well' and my 'Oh well'. It was that sort of night.
"Julie's left me," I would confess to her.
"Which one's Julie?"
"The one from the writers group."
"The one you've fancied for months."
"Yes." That Julie.
"I didn't know you were going out."
"We went out on Saturday. I persuaded her to see a film and we went for a drink afterwards."
"Well?"
"She left me on Sunday."
"And?" Even though I couldn't see her face in the clouded night I knew her expression, eager, interested, interrogative. 'Did you?' is what she wanted to know.
"I stayed at hers," I said, using the most neutral words I could find.
"Yay! You shagged Julie. You've been dying to do that."
"I suppose," I said. "But it couldn't have been a great shag, she left me the next day."
"Oh well," Mo said.
"Oh well," I said.
We walked over a mile in complete silence between her 'Oh well' and my 'Oh well'. It was that sort of night.
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I like the way in which you're building up the layers of this. Don't forget the speech marks in that first section.
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