The Harlot
By loquaciousicity
Thu, 14 May 2015
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Mid Uzi shots from vacant lots, which strike and ricochet
a painted girl with flaxen curl (named Wendy)’s on her way
to tantalise with half-clad thighs, to trick again today;
and indiscreet along the street she gives her pride away
to any guy who’s passing by with cash and time to pay.
In concert halls, beyond the sprawls 'round shabby cabarets,
unjaded thoughts of Camelot imbue divine ballets.
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Great rhyme scheme here - I
Permalink Submitted by london_calling79 on
Great rhyme scheme here - I thought it ended too soon. I wanted more!
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Just looked at this one,
Just looked at this one, since reading no.2. You manage to imply so much in so few lines, and show how both lose out. Are the last two lines by way of contrast? Rhiannon
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