I will ruin you
By TheGameCat
Sat, 09 Mar 2013
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Like champagne ruins rich kids
Like wasps can ruin picnics
Like kisses ruin lipstick
I will ruin you
Like Hollywood ruins novels
Like poets ruin bottles
Like brick walls ruin knuckles
I will ruin you
Like cancer ruins Christmas
Like telling ruins wishes
Like dead men ruin nooses
I will ruin you
Like gelding ruins stallions
Like bankers ruin millions
Like armies ruin civilians
I will ruin you
Like pissing ruins blow jobs
Like rapists ruin heartthrobs
Like good men ruin their gods
I will ruin you
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'Like pissing ruins blow
Permalink Submitted by The Walrus on
'Like pissing ruins blow jobs' - that's a cracker, TheGameCat. This is quite a piece, and I'd love to know who inspired the hatred that in turn led to the poem. I wrote a similar hate poem some time back called The Candle.
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Each line,.....like a shoe
Each line,.....like a shoe in the face. Superbly spat out.
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Yes it's bloody good. I
Yes it's bloody good. I stuttered only on the penultimate line (delete 'their' unless it f#%ks with the maths). Damn fine read.
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Well Ant' you obviously know
Well Ant' you obviously know what you're doing and it is your great work. I read stuff several times and then out loud a few times (but only stuff that I think is worth it). I suppose if I heard you perform it I might be swayed. However I can't reconcile the stall that I hear at that point. But hey, it's a piffling, minor, subjective irrelevance. The fact remains that this is a very good poem.
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