Lord Timmy Dinmore

By TonyC25

Fri, 18 Jan 2019

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Lord Timmy Dinmore

Finest ever collie of the glens

A flash and steadfast

as a ship's captain

Sheep never dared look in his eyes

or defy

Retired still bright as an aurora

I ruffle him by the fire

and when asleep

his tail flicks from green memories

Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on Fri, 2019-01-18 20:36

A charming word picture - thank you

should that be 'as flash' in line 3?

Permalink Submitted by TonyC25 on Fri, 2019-01-18 20:50

Cheers put a flash to denote speed

Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on Fri, 2019-01-18 20:55

oh ok - I thought it could be either

Permalink Submitted by TonyC25 on Fri, 2019-01-18 20:58

Yes true :)

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Sat, 2019-01-19 21:57

Vivid scene. Rhiannon