Old Man
By TonyC25
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I saw the drunken shrunken old man
slumped at the bar
Do you wanna a drink? He asked me
with a whisky soaked stammer
I said a beer,
noticed then his alcohol ravaged face
but it’s his eyes I won’t forget
They rained sorrow
For him, there would be no happy tomorrow
I knew there was no free lunch
And I’d have to listen to his litany of despair
Of the love he’d had for the girl with the golden hair
and how he’d left her up in the air
Of how he’d chance of adventure abroad
but never the time could he afford
Of how he had lost touch with his brother
and didn’t see his mother
before she’d died
And oh how his life was so full of strife
Then he tried to give me some advice
Follow your heart not your head young man
I beg you
confront your issues and find some peace
and never forget
there is plenty of time for regret
I went to leave I’d had my fill
It hit me then, a sharp tingle down my spine
Those blue eyes looked like mine
My name in his tattered hat confirmed my worst fears
The terror came, overwhelming
His was a possible future for me
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An interestingly, haunting
An interestingly, haunting poem. Just imagining meeting yourself old and frail would be scary.
Fascinating read.
Jenny.
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