Return to Sender
By Vesper Holly
Wed, 11 Nov 2015
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When words are all I am allowed to touch with
each one means so much
and now the texts have been erased
leaving silence
negative space
some words of mine, some second hand sighs
we arrive
now you have a record of every text we every sent
when you have taken all my sins
eyes and hands
to read my skin
I will be left with only a record
some typos and texts
so please, if it's not too much
copy, paste, return my words
pale mementos of imagined touch
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Oh I do like the ending of
Permalink Submitted by london_calling79 on
Oh I do like the ending of this. Is it me or could you replace 'record' either the first or second time? Love the way your rhyme scheme builds.
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