Perpetual Emotion

By well-wisher

Fri, 04 Jan 2013

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4 comments

kiss me and
and me kiss

again and
and again

I’ll love you and
and you love I’ll

forever and
and forever

Comments

This tells me that you want

Permalink Submitted by Bee on Fri, 2013-01-04 14:36

This tells me that you want to be kissed a lot and that in return you will love the chosen kissee forever, which is quite a long time. So, that makes this an excellent poem, in my opinion. The only thing I would have added, is perhaps an amen, at the end, just to make it rhyme and to finnish it off. Just a suggestion - probably a silly one. Bee

Bee

Hello, Bee. You need to read

Permalink Submitted by well-wisher on Fri, 2013-01-04 15:23

Hello, Bee. You need to read each verse in a clockwise circle. Each verse is actually an eternal (or perpetual) line. As far as I know this has never been done before.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Thanks a lot Bee. Very glad

Permalink Submitted by well-wisher on Fri, 2013-01-04 15:24

Thanks a lot Bee. Very glad you enjoyed it.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Sorry about that - What a

Permalink Submitted by Bee on Fri, 2013-01-04 15:14

Sorry about that - What a great idea! Still like it, though - Bee

Bee