tongue - twister (IP)

By well-wisher

Sun, 29 May 2011
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4 comments
 

Two young,
gangly teens
entangle their
dangling tongues
in a tingling
tongue tango,
their trickling
spittle mingling
as they lick and tickle,
their two tongues tussling
in a tiny tug of love.

Certificate 15
Poem
Poems
Erotica

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Smashing, this, well-wisher;-) Some lovely use of vocabulary. Tina

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Great- a very good tongue twister ;)Pia

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi well-wisher, I really enjoyed saying this out loud and your tongue twister had me going with its great rhythm. Original IP. Thanks for the read. Jenny.

 

Submitted by well-wisher on
Thankyou,Tina, Pia and Jenny. I'm really glad that you all liked it. I've always liked Tongue Twisters like "Peter Piper Picked A Peck Of Pickled Peppers" and it just seemed to fit the subject of a "French" Kiss perfectly

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn