Bluebird
By yaerink1203
Thu, 13 Nov 2008
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I have a very bluebird,
It's been around, yes I've heard.
His wings flap all the way,
it always makes my day.
That pretty bluebird.
flew away,
many say,
I sob in bed,
like led, weighing me down.
Crying and kicking,
waiting for it to come back,
SHOUTING!
Day and Night..
till one day,
I heard a chirp,
looking outside my window....
I see two bluebirds!
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Spelling should be 'lead'
Spelling should be 'lead' and tenses - 'saw' in the last line, but this is much better, a good rewrite.
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