the sky speaks silence

By yassin

Wed, 06 Jan 2010
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sweet memories held her hand
through the long starrred night
a whisper of a face
carried into the moonlight
streaming thoughts
lacerating confused mind
and cat rub miaw against bare legs
walking into the arms of a stranger
the first bite
was all he needed
he takes her off to another land
noone misses the girl
on the streets
shes another vanished misfit
and the sky speaks silence tonight

Certificate PG
Poem
poetry
Fantasy

Comments

Submitted by Beeme on
I really like this image "a whisper of a face carried into the moonlight" I found the last lines very emotive and effective. Beeme xx

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Submitted by shoe on
I liked this a lot, and a lovely ending. A couple of typo's in there though, :~}

 

Submitted by yassin on
hey thanks not so hot at spelling