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Hidden in the Mayonnaise (Part 3)
The Frybergs had a feast for the return of their prodigal son like it was a Monday, which it was. And the usual Monday fare was lobster bisque for...
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Hidden in the Mayonnaise (Part 2)
While Sam and Sullivan strolled down the concrete sidewalk, their mayonnaise soaked bodies continued to accumulate things like magnets. Dust and sand...
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Hidden in the Mayonnaise (Part 1)
A blinding red light glowed obnoxiously over the studio room at the WNRC radio station in New York. The bulb was a clear warning for all to stay out...
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George George and Mimi Face Professor Fluke (Chapter 5)
Read previous chapters: Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4 Professor Fluke was no longer in the form of that mustachioed, bespectacled...
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The Back (Part 2)
Fred then started clicking his tongue and shaking his head at her patronizingly. “I’m afraid you leave me with no choice,” he said, quickly jotting...
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Excellent poem. Teriffically
Posted on Sun, 06 Feb 2022
Excellent poem. Teriffically descriptive. I can see the dark storm clouds and the snow falling through the beech trees. Such a wonderful vision!
Read full commentPosted in February Rainbow
This is really the most
Posted on Wed, 02 Feb 2022
This is really the most engaging travelogue I think I've ever read. It's filled with such interesting characters and your interactions with them. It's just impossible for me to think how this could have been better as a first world tourist in a...
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That is powerful, a truly
Posted on Sun, 26 Dec 2021
That is powerful, a truly stunning work. I'd read a novel not too long ago about people who work at a mortuary, but this was far more descriptive and far more emotionally resonant than I got out of a whole novel.
Read full commentPosted in An Undertaking
Excellent
Posted on Sat, 04 Dec 2021
This is so elegant and lovely to read. Takes me back to those simpler times.
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I especially like the counter
Posted on Wed, 12 Apr 2023
I especially like the counter/culture word play in there. Thank you :)
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Excellent, congrats on the
Posted on Wed, 12 Apr 2023
Excellent, congrats on the Cherry and POTD! Engaging and unique diary entries.
Read full commentPosted in Waiting for the Flyers - Part 10 Memories
Great story. There's
Posted on Tue, 11 Apr 2023
Great story. There's something fascinating to me about false or fuzzy memories and this tapped into that!
Read full commentPosted in Tommyknocker
This really captures the
Posted on Sun, 09 Apr 2023
This really captures the essence of childhood (and children at heart) when they break into something they love. It's a big part of being human. I liked your "kaleidoscope of butterflies" metaphor. Lovely work!
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I love nature and your
Posted on Mon, 10 Apr 2023
I love nature and your naturalistic poetry. I visualized it perfectly
Read full commentPosted in Graceful Uplifting
Such wonderful writing... It
Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023
Such wonderful writing... It's such a tough struggle and this writing is a great outlet for yourself and for those of us reading it.
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