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Blood is thicker than water
Rain splatters the pavement when I set out. My sister, Teresa, doesn’t live far, but then the moon isn’t that far, and I don’t particularly want to...
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A song for Europe 2
Cry off negotiation Cut up small Snatch a breath Will she-won’t he? Luck of the draw Those who survive Those who died Word of mouth Mouth on mouth...
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Plot without a story
The note flapped through the letterbox and lay on the linoleum. I pulled open the door, just in time to see a denimed back sauntering up the street...
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No Good Reason to be Chicken
Madame Cheekie was a hen’s kind of hen, no clucking about, her hooded eyes darkened and she’d just tell you how it was, or should be, which was the...
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A Song For Europe - Part 1.
State who we are No applause No stars Just another act For a moment –egalitie Rejects and fallen Fraternite of nobody Pray God Faith on its knees The...
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this is good, really good,
Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2016
this is good, really good, but could be far better if you broke the three seperate narratives into seperate storylines of six, thirteen and eighteen. Slow down time. It's got an edge about it, which I like.
Read full commentPosted in I didn't want to do it
The movement and moments of
Posted on Tue, 14 Jun 2016
The movement and moments of silence and complicity make a sweet kind of electiricity.
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difficult question to answer,
Posted on Thu, 09 Jun 2016
difficult question to answer, but I guess poetry throws a light.
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Lovely and the denouement
Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2016
Lovely and the denouement fits like a driver's glove.
Read full commentPosted in SECRETS Part 2
yeh, I like this or get it,
Posted on Mon, 30 May 2016
yeh, I like this or get it, as like seems the wrong words, as does like. I'm sure you know what I mean.
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the rise and fall of us all.
Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016
the rise and fall of us all.
Read full commentPosted in Today We Dressed Up And Pretended To Be Rich
yellow, my favouritie colour
Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016
yellow, my favouritie colour and this is so sweet, it's right up my street. Mellow and blue it combines the colours of you.
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enjoyed reading about your
Posted on Tue, 17 May 2016
enjoyed reading about your travels.
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yep. 3000 words isn't a lot;
Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016
yep. 3000 words isn't a lot; only it is. All the reasons you outline are lived examples, but what struck me most was the word 'perfect'. First 3000 is never going to be perfect, if it's legible, or evern if it isn't, that's a start. An outline....
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he is what he'll be, that's
Posted on Fri, 06 May 2016
he is what he'll be, that's plain to see.
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