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What a wonderful piece. You
Posted on Thu, 14 Jul 2022
What a wonderful piece. You write about your grandmother and uncle with such love (you mentioned her in an earlier piece I think). How nice for her to be surrounded by her family like that A very well deserved set of cherries - congratulations...
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How amazing for you Jenny -
Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2022
How amazing for you Jenny - you're so lucky! Do please try to take a pic for us
Read full commentPosted in Unexpected Guests
This is beautiful - well done
Posted on Sat, 09 Jul 2022
This is beautiful - well done!
Read full commentPosted in Twilight Zone
I meant cord as opposed to
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
I meant cord as opposed to chord which I think is musical?
Read full commentPosted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three)
Nice build up of tension this
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
Nice build up of tension this part
couple of things:
bulb dangling from a chord on the ceiling
Her tartan, plaid skirt
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That reads much better now.
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
That reads much better now. About the dialogue: one of the best pieces of writing advice I ever received was from Ewan, years ago - about trying very hard not to make things obvious - eg 'is that a dagger I see before me?'. I always remember that...
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This is our Poem of the Month
Posted on Mon, 06 Jun 2022
This is our Poem of the Month - Congratulations!
Read full commentPosted in Meet Ze Monsta
I completely missed out on
Posted on Fri, 01 Jul 2022
I completely missed out on this wonderful interpretation - thanks for posting and congratulations on the cherries. Some of the old fairytales were very grim weren't they! The Disney versions are so one dimensional
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I'm very intrigued to know
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
I'm very intrigued to know more - some good scene setting in this part!
A few suggestions:
Little Bobby Weaver/a small boy - but he's a teenager? Also much further down he's referred to as little again
Are you sure Nokia is a...
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Thank you for this onemore -
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
Thank you for this onemore - my favourite time, and you've recreated it in words
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