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Magic Lantern
The strangest night of my life? Let me flick though the magic lantern of my mind. Of course there were the nights of illness. Night walls moved in...
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Joy
The sky was a perfect, blackbird’s egg, blue. Evelyn tilted her head back to watch the kaleidoscope flashes of green and blue rushing above her...
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LDV: Washwood Heath (Necropolis)
Grit, backbone of Midland industry, ground out by the elements, glacial drift, geological shift. Upon gravel the city made its shape. Halls of...
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Penance
Mrs Hohepa watched the little girl sitting on the bench opposite swing her legs. Back and forth, back and forth. ‘Pretty little thing. Swing your...
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Natural History
In the history of school, Class 5 was the happiest. Outside swan plants grew - we gave them sidelong glances, hope was brewing. A race through times...
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Nice shifts of perspective, I
Posted on Tue, 27 Jan 2015
Nice shifts of perspective, I like the methodical use of description, matching his actions, the suspense builds well too.
Read full commentPosted in Meditation
Magical.
Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2015
Magical.
Read full commentPosted in What I promised the sea
I like the use of direct
Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2015
I like the use of direct address and the building of suspense.
Read full commentPosted in Park Bench
Wonderful, I can see how this
Posted on Thu, 22 Jan 2015
Wonderful, I can see how this moment would stay with you.
Read full commentPosted in The lake and the seagull
Tom is a great character, you
Posted on Wed, 21 Jan 2015
Tom is a great character, you played with the reader's feeling thoughout, really enjoyed reading this.
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Hitchhikers
The curse of being human.
Posted on Sun, 18 Jan 2015
The curse of being human.
Read full commentPosted in three a.m.
I really like the way you
Posted on Thu, 15 Jan 2015
I really like the way you have built this, excellent structure.
Read full commentPosted in Melancholy
The archeology of ourselves,
Posted on Tue, 06 Jan 2015
The archeology of ourselves, I like the ideas and images in this poem.
Read full commentPosted in Sifting Through
Love this cat's eye view of
Posted on Mon, 05 Jan 2015
Love this cat's eye view of the world, hope he keeps up with his journal.
Read full commentPosted in Omar's Diary 4th January 2015
Good on the details (cake and
Posted on Sat, 03 Jan 2015
Good on the details (cake and coffee), more character background would be good so we care about the character.
Read full commentPosted in Pure Magic Chapter 2
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