TOURNIQUET by Theresa Gaynord "And the veils between past , present and future shall be lifted." EARTH, WATER, AIR, FIRE...WALK WITH ME. She doesn’t...
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Well done!
Posted on Sat, 16 May 2020
I liked the story within the poem. And the revelations you made little by little building suspense. I would personally end it here though ...Changing my meds solely their capability...strong enough with that ending.
Well done!
Posted on Sat, 16 May 2020
I liked the story within the poem. And the revelations you made little by little building suspense. I would personally end it here though ...Changing my meds solely their capability...strong enough with that ending.
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He sure was...
Posted on Sat, 16 May 2020
He will be missed.
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I like the uniqueness of the
Posted on Mon, 18 May 2015
I like the uniqueness of the write and the mood of nature upon our nature as we experience it. Interesting piece. Well done.
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