Bethan Hall

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StoryEverything was Blue and Green Philip Sidney165 years 11 months ago
StoryGod Knows J.P. Oertel69 years 1 month ago
StoryHello, Bookworm. Bethan Hall09 years 5 months ago
StoryA Passenger Incident johnshade19 years 5 months ago
StoryPeep Show Philip Sidney229 years 9 months ago
StoryTwo Minutes to Midnight - Test Chapter (church) Bethan Hall39 years 9 months ago
StoryFading Colors, Prologue and Ch.1 J.P. Oertel19 years 10 months ago
StoryWhat's a group of hipsters called? london_calling79109 years 10 months ago
StoryTwo Minutes to Midnight - Test Chapter Bethan Hall89 years 10 months ago
StoryA Kind of Self-Inflicted Pain: Optimism va-nessa19 years 11 months ago
StoryBook of Lain (completed prologue) unedited Smitty49 years 11 months ago
StoryBook of Lain (beginning of novel) Smitty69 years 11 months ago
StoryChosen Ones larry39 years 11 months ago
StoryTwo Minutes to Midnight - Opening Chapter Bethan Hall69 years 11 months ago

My stories

Hello, Bookworm.

(Hey there! This is a writing experiment of mine in getting the reader attached to the narrator so if you are beautiful enough of a person to leave...

Two Minutes to Midnight - Test Chapter (church)

( Just for quick context : Hey there! this is a quick section of a novel I'm trying to peice together and want to know what works and what doesn't so...

Two Minutes to Midnight - Test Chapter

(Just for quick context: Hello! This is just a quick chapter I wanted to take place in the middle of the novel I'm writing between two of the main...
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Two Minutes to Midnight - Opening Chapter

A friend of mine once told me a schoolyard legend that would grow with each passing season. The legend of a man of the forest; as quick as the wind...

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Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2015

Hey smiley glad I got to read the rest of it so soon. The two major points I would...

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Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2015

The irony you use in the title is a great idea but what I'd do is shorten it to just "Self-inflicted optimism" ...

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I love minimalist juxtaposing

Posted on Fri, 06 Feb 2015

I love minimalist juxtaposing imagery like the opening of this, it's really impactful ...

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