Bethan Hall
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Hello, Bookworm.
(Hey there! This is a writing experiment of mine in getting the reader attached to the narrator so if you are beautiful enough of a person to leave...
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Two Minutes to Midnight - Test Chapter (church)
( Just for quick context : Hey there! this is a quick section of a novel I'm trying to peice together and want to know what works and what doesn't so...
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Two Minutes to Midnight - Test Chapter
(Just for quick context: Hello! This is just a quick chapter I wanted to take place in the middle of the novel I'm writing between two of the main...
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Two Minutes to Midnight - Opening Chapter
A friend of mine once told me a schoolyard legend that would grow with each passing season. The legend of a man of the forest; as quick as the wind...
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Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2015
Hey
glad I got to read the rest of it so soon. The two major points I would...
Read full commentPosted in Book of Lain (completed prologue) unedited
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Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2015
The irony you use in the title is a great idea but what I'd do is shorten it to just "Self-inflicted optimism" ...
Read full commentPosted in A Kind of Self-Inflicted Pain: Optimism
I love minimalist juxtaposing
Posted on Fri, 06 Feb 2015
I love minimalist juxtaposing imagery like the opening of this, it's really impactful ...
Read full commentPosted in Everything was Blue and Green