BeamsAndVoids

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I have 28 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 38084 times and 4 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2 of my 162 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2 votes

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My Solar Eclipse

By BeamsAndVoids on Tue, 22 Aug 2017

A solar eclipse Only directly viewable in America, how fitting. The rest of us must make do With images from social media and news sites Note: I live...
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At Home

By BeamsAndVoids on Sun, 23 Jul 2017

Grey flecks, reflecting in the grey afternoon light of the mirror. I remember a poem, you say. Something something I am nearing the place. Busying...
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Magnets

By BeamsAndVoids on Sat, 03 Jun 2017

Some people feel the rain, others just get wet. You always carry an umbrella, and I wear a hoodie. When it pours it down we come close together. A...
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Neither Here Nor There

By BeamsAndVoids on Sat, 15 Apr 2017

The 'ding' brings me back, as we slow down, then stop. I blink several times to hasten my focus in this harsh light. No other vehicle is illuminated...
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Flower

By BeamsAndVoids on Sun, 19 Mar 2017

Toes clench in the crumpled duvet. Double-helix legs, bare and searing against the cool air, wind and turn and swirl upward. Hands out-stretched,...
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2 of my comments have received 2 Great Feedback votes

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I liked this poem very

Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2008

I liked this poem very much. The subdued opening mirrored again at the end worked well I thought in creating an effective atmosphere. Many of the lines bordered on the abstract for me too, which only enhanced the whole piece. Yep, really enjoyed...Read full comment

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I liked this, well crafted

Posted on Sat, 22 Mar 2008

I liked this, well crafted and the first stanza in particular is excellent, in my opinion. But I didn't really get the overall point of it. It's a bit vague. Then again, maybe that's just me.Read full comment

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