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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Story | Carousel | Stickleback | 3 | 2 years 6 months ago |
| Story | The Man on the Other End of the Phone | Ewan | 13 | 2 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Tzara-ist Manifesto | Ewan | 1 | 3 years 6 months ago |
| Story | 50 Ways | rokkitnite | 4 | 6 years 6 months ago |
| Story | The Ship Club | poetjude | 2 | 7 years 3 months ago |
| Story | My Solar Eclipse | BeamsAndVoids | 0 | 7 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Night-flying in North Wales | Philip Sidney | 19 | 7 years 5 months ago |
| Story | At Home | BeamsAndVoids | 0 | 7 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Magnets | BeamsAndVoids | 0 | 7 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Neither Here Nor There | BeamsAndVoids | 0 | 7 years 9 months ago |
| Story | where the raven flies | ephraim crud | 13 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Boldly a Woman | Deliberately Ev... | 19 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Flower | BeamsAndVoids | 2 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Paris in November | BeamsAndVoids | 3 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | The Middle of the Road | queen beatle | 5 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | As I Lie Here Now | BeamsAndVoids | 1 | 11 years 5 months ago |
| Story | 365 | BeamsAndVoids | 4 | 11 years 5 months ago |
| Collection | Stories | BeamsAndVoids | 0 | 11 years 5 months ago |
| Collection | Thoughts/Ideas | BeamsAndVoids | 0 | 11 years 5 months ago |
| Collection | Poems | BeamsAndVoids | 0 | 11 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Start | BeamsAndVoids | 0 | 11 years 7 months ago |
| Story | L'Haim (To Life) | littleditty | 1 | 12 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Departures | Ewan | 1 | 14 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Child | tarashannon | 4 | 15 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Albatross of the World | Ewan | 8 | 15 years 2 months ago |
I liked this poem very
Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2008
I liked this poem very much. The subdued opening mirrored again at the end worked well I thought in creating an effective atmosphere. Many of the lines bordered on the abstract for me too, which only enhanced the whole piece. Yep, really enjoyed...Read full commentPosted in Carousel
I liked this, well crafted
Posted on Sat, 22 Mar 2008
I liked this, well crafted and the first stanza in particular is excellent, in my opinion. But I didn't really get the overall point of it. It's a bit vague. Then again, maybe that's just me.Read full commentPosted in Departures