Departures
By Ewan
Sat, 22 Mar 2008
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In the distance, where
clouds pretend to be mountains
-and vice versa- a plane is going
somewhere: leaving sunshine
behind. For what?
For names of beauty
once on silk and spice routes? Or
two out of three points of the Golden
Triangle? Guiris - the
othered Ingles
- leaving Spain for good
or ill-planned raids on accounts
and benefits: red faces of
fierce entitlement scanned
by pale officials.
In the mornings, one
plane crosses the far sierra
-flying north- I never check
an airport timetable for a
destination.
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I liked this, well crafted
Permalink Submitted by BeamsAndVoids on
I liked this, well crafted and the first stanza in particular is excellent, in my opinion. But I didn't really get the overall point of it. It's a bit vague. Then again, maybe that's just me.
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