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I'm not sure which country you're in but am guessing Malaysia. This is a really interesting read - past and present meeting up - and in a few lines you give a really stong impression of your father. Thinking of you all.
Very wise - memories are so strong though. I had a friend who said to me once that the past plays tricks on you, makes you think it's still ahead of you, waiting to happen. I liked all the chaos and then the stillness at the end. And I had to...
Di Hard, that lady in the Post Office must have been an angel! I've been that broke too and am down to my last beans now. One year, I had only £1 in my purse. I stayed in and wrote four letters to go in Christmas cards I couldn't afford to post....
Well, you drew me in with the title, my favourite Christmas song. I read it several times, each time liking it more, and it seemed as if I could hear them singing it. So Happy Christmas!
Thank you very much! But don't underestimate yourself! Your poems are always very good and you have your own lovely style. As for me being busy - well, I've just finished work for the holidays as I'm term time only. I've blocked my mind to it and...
I love the feeling of going from the uncertainty and sense of cold on the beach to the warmth at the end. Also - the wash wash wash and eroding and soft as sand - with a feeling of patience and acceptance. Liked it a lot.
I got pulled in by the
Posted on Wed, 29 Dec 2021
I got pulled in by the artwork - only to find that your words matched it in colour and grace. Really good poem.
Read full commentPosted in the seagull
Just four lines and you've
Posted on Thu, 23 Dec 2021
Just four lines and you've captured an image again. Succinct as an X at the bottom of the page.
Read full commentPosted in X is for xxx
I'm not sure which country
Posted on Tue, 21 Dec 2021
I'm not sure which country you're in but am guessing Malaysia. This is a really interesting read - past and present meeting up - and in a few lines you give a really stong impression of your father. Thinking of you all.
Read full commentPosted in Rising Waters and Fear of a Great Flood
Very wise - memories are so
Posted on Tue, 21 Dec 2021
Very wise - memories are so strong though. I had a friend who said to me once that the past plays tricks on you, makes you think it's still ahead of you, waiting to happen. I liked all the chaos and then the stillness at the end. And I had to...
Read full commentPosted in If I Could Turn Back Time
Di Hard, that lady in the
Posted on Sun, 19 Dec 2021
Di Hard, that lady in the Post Office must have been an angel! I've been that broke too and am down to my last beans now. One year, I had only £1 in my purse. I stayed in and wrote four letters to go in Christmas cards I couldn't afford to post....
Read full commentPosted in T is for Tinsel and Twigs
Well, you drew me in with the
Posted on Sun, 19 Dec 2021
Well, you drew me in with the title, my favourite Christmas song. I read it several times, each time liking it more, and it seemed as if I could hear them singing it. So Happy Christmas!
Read full commentPosted in A Fairy Tale of New York
Thank you very much! But don
Posted on Fri, 17 Dec 2021
Thank you very much! But don't underestimate yourself! Your poems are always very good and you have your own lovely style. As for me being busy - well, I've just finished work for the holidays as I'm term time only. I've blocked my mind to it and...
Read full commentPosted in Day before a birthday
I love the feeling of going
Posted on Fri, 17 Dec 2021
I love the feeling of going from the uncertainty and sense of cold on the beach to the warmth at the end. Also - the wash wash wash and eroding and soft as sand - with a feeling of patience and acceptance. Liked it a lot.
Read full commentPosted in Day before a birthday
I also loved that coming home
Posted on Wed, 14 Jul 2021
I also loved that coming home last part. It anchors everything that went before.
Read full commentPosted in Coming Home
You caught a moment
Posted on Wed, 14 Jul 2021
You caught a moment beautifully. I love the sound of the wood pigeon.
Read full commentPosted in A sleepy mid-July mid-afternoon
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