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I have 1156 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2174896 times and 1172 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1567 of my 15,073 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1599 votes

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Cherry

Grimms60

Karen answers the door tugging the belt of her flowery nightgown tighter, smiling, and giving a little wiggle as Dougie towers over her and ogles the...
Cherry

Grimms59

On the day of his dad’s funeral Tony gets himself ready early while the care staff busy themselves having a meeting to decide who is to accompany him...
Cherry

Grimms58

Bruno perches on the bed in the muggy heat of his room with his jacket zipped up, and the leather strap of his school bag over his shoulder, waiting...
Cherry

Grimms57

Pizza Face pulls his duffle coat hood down, to show he is serious, even though the rain is coming down horizontal. He does a feint and step-over, is...
Cherry

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Angela stands, waiting. Bob shouts again. ‘Jesus,’ he rants, when there’s no reply and no sign of footfall. ‘You better come in, then.’ She cranes...

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1567 of my comments have received 1599 Great Feedback votes

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he was meant to be Britain's

Posted on Thu, 15 Oct 2020

he was meant to be Britain's answer to Elvis. Not for me. But I've no interest in music. Can't remember what he was accused of, don't care that much. interesting post. 

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Posted in THE GRANVILLE PARKERS - CLIFF- MOVE IT!

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classic ending. Chaplin was

Posted on Wed, 14 Oct 2020

classic ending. Chaplin was indeed a silent one. I loved the bit about Grace Kelly. 

Felix was overcome with surprise emotion and he was now happy he’d decided to make an appearance in the pub; 

This is a bit clunky. 'surprised...

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Posted in Phil Longley Was Still There (2)

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sad, very sad, animals and

Posted on Wed, 14 Oct 2020

sad, very sad, animals and people, facing the same monster we created. 

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Posted in An Australian View

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wonderful. Ewan namechecked

Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2020

wonderful. Ewan namechecked me because I named a pair of shoes my character was wearng, Adidas Samba. These were the top of the tree. One of my cllass mates had a pair. I noticed he wre them all the times. We went to PE, he wore them for titba....

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Posted in I Name that Shoe....

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haunting 

Posted on Fri, 09 Oct 2020

haunting 

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Posted in Gatorland

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we all chase our dreams,

Posted on Thu, 01 Oct 2020

we all chase our dreams, sometimes, if we're very lucky, we catch them. 

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Posted in After Dark

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I like a bit of 'wildness'

Posted on Sun, 13 Sep 2020

I like a bit of 'wildness' gathered here. 

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Posted in gather

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I couldn't be doing with all

Posted on Wed, 02 Sep 2020

I couldn't be doing with all that blue (and red and white) as it's a mortal sin. As for Henry VIII, just your typical, run-of-the-mill monarch, good to see he left a sound table, if not a sound reputation. You put it to good use. No chopping...

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Posted in Flamingo Hotel. Bookings Now Open.

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nicely done, jenny. 

Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2020

nicely done, jenny. 

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Posted in Thinking Out Loud

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not sure I understand it, but

Posted on Mon, 10 Aug 2020

not sure I understand it, but hey, it feels right. 

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Posted in Epiales

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