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Grimms51
Bruno is hanging about waiting for Tony when he comes out of the office. ‘An ambulance came and took Hunter away,’ he explains. ‘Hunter swears he’s...
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Grimms50
Tony places the fork carefully back down on the table, beside the butter dish. Clutching his eye, a colourful arabesque, milky with red veins, half-...
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Grimms49
Tony shares a room at the top of the stairs with Bruno. ‘He’s a bed-wetter,’ whispers Julie. ‘We may get him up during the night to take him to the...
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Grimms48
Rab cashes his Giro the next day and agrees to meet Jaz and the Tash back in the pub. Jaz sits waiting, nursing a warm pint, the Tash beside him...
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Grimms47
Outside the snooker club, a black Hackney cab across the road lets somebody off. Jaz pulls his collar up against drizzling rain, decides since he’s...
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I guessed that Harrison would
Posted on Sat, 04 Jul 2020
I guessed that Harrison would become Grant. Good start to the body-swap story genre (if such a genre exists?)
Read full commentPosted in "Past and Present" Chapter 1
good story. I don't think you
Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2020
good story. I don't think you need to reiterate about the cancer being in the middle of Jeff's stomach.
Read full commentPosted in I Can Never Say Sorry…
yes - and moe. But we can but
Posted on Sun, 21 Jun 2020
yes - and moe. But we can but try to define it.
Read full commentPosted in What is Love?
hail, spring indeed.
Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2020
hail, spring indeed.
Read full commentPosted in This year's walk...(08)
he boredom when cleaning
Posted on Fri, 12 Jun 2020
he boredom when cleaning rooms today was unfucking real. It was driving him potty. My brain is dying. Felt like it’s being inflated with air.
change in third-person voice to 'My' first-person voice.
new-age wanker.
indeed...
Read full commentPosted in The DJs Who Turn into Swans
for perhaps the first time,
Posted on Fri, 12 Jun 2020
for perhaps the first time, the younger generation can no longer expect to have a better life than their parents. That's the saddest part. As you mention, the rich had it easy. They still do. The poor had bleak and short lives, or so we would...
Read full commentPosted in Living In Another Era.
there's hope for us all
Posted on Tue, 09 Jun 2020
there's hope for us all -eventually.
Read full commentPosted in The Interviewee (2045)
thnaks delibetely ev and
Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2020
thnaks delibetely ev and everyone else who vetured in. Let's get out there and write (there should be some dramatic music here).
Read full commentPosted in before she could not
a feast for the eyes, but
Posted on Sun, 24 May 2020
a feast for the eyes, but there's morality here buried in mouth-watering fruit. Adam and Eve it.
Read full commentPosted in There is a Still Life in the Old Dog Yet
gravity is not an apple. yeh,
Posted on Sat, 23 May 2020
gravity is not an apple. yeh, I like that aand this.
Read full commentPosted in How To Be Authentic
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